Hi today I'm doing SLJ this activity is called wind beneath my wings so how how this works is I make a google drawing about a flying animal and post it.
So here is mine.
Thank you.
BYE!!!
By Peyton.
Tuesday 8 January 2019
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ReplyDeleteI am a student from Pt England School so you probably don't know me. I cam around to this blog post as It looked super creative. I've chosen to comment on this blog post of yours as it's about flying animals, flying Japanese Squid. I really love how you've written down each fact of yours in your post. I really hope you enjoy the rest of your holidays. What's your most favourite fact you chose in this activity?
Your's Sincerly,
Hinerangi
Kia Ora Peyton,
ReplyDeleteNice work completing another Summer Learning Journey activity. What a cool DLO you've made about the Japanese Flying Squid. I never knew such an animal existed! You've given us three great facts about your chosen animal. In your last box where you've written, "Japanese Flying Squid live 5 to 25 c water." Could you explain this to us again? I'm unsure if you mean they live in water thats between 5 to 25 degrees, or maybe it was something about the animals age? I would love to know what you mean't to write.
I see you have doubled up some words in your post, such as "how how" and "with with". Proofreading your work is a great way to double check for any mistakes before you post online. It only takes a few minutes to go over your work again, and it can save you having to go back later and fix any silly mistakes you may have made.
I look forward to reading more of your great blog posts, keep up the good work!
Thanks,
Jordan