I strongly believe that NZ should open our borders.We could simply have EVERYONE stay at home for one day and take the saliva test, then we could isolate the people with COVID and we could all carry on with our lives.
Firstly,
Some people isolate themselves alone which may not sound bad but there are actually problems with being alone for that long.Some extraverts that live alone have an extremely hard time being alone for about five months like last year.Some people can die from depression.Childrens learning can also decrease because they have less motivation to do there best because their at home and not in school which helps them to focus on school.
Secondly,
Workers aren’t getting paid very much which is hard because their in Lock down which is very expensive especially for single parents.Because the shops aren’t open it causes some trouble for lots of people to get money.And many people are losing their jobs due to COVID.Also many businesses are closing because they count on tourist to buy their products.
Thirdly,
We should stop other viruses like delta to limit the amount of doctors needed to deal with.We need to have enough space for the COVID cases so that we can stop COVID.
I strongly believe that we should open our borders but after all of NZ has taken the COVID test.It would help with business problems and money.We must open our borders to the countries with less COVID.
Hi Peyton, you've shown really insightful ideas in your persuasive writing. You've explained your arguments well - especially when you gave the real life example relating to deaths from depression. It makes your argument more convincing.
ReplyDeleteIn your third argument, you mentioned that we need to stop other viruses like delta. Are you able to talk about how it relates to opening borders?
Great to see that you are using a command in your conclusion. It shows that you are influencing the reader to take your side. Ka pai!