Friday, 29 October 2021
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SLJ day 6
Kia ora everyone! Todays task was to explore and research about vector art and how to make it. Vector art is an animated piece of art. Whi...
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Hi!!! I'm Peyton. Welcome back to... "Peyton's SLJ!" today I'm going to be writing a inspirational quot...
Thanks for sharing your writing. It's really important to evaluate the good and bad points of something. I thought you had a great insight as to why people go to the inlet - they go there to see wildlife. I wonder how we could help people to see the wildlife and also help the wildlife?? I know it is so annoying when you run out of resources like glue sticks. Can you use anything else? Keep up the great work.
ReplyDeleteKia Ora Peyton, you've done a good job solving the 3D shape riddles. Did you know that the diamonds in the Mitsubishi logo are called rhombuses? That's because all four sides are the same length.
ReplyDeleteYou have used good structure in your persuasive writing. I like that you've used an introduction, conclusion and new paragraphs for different arguments.
I wonder if you could add a few more details to your paragraphs? Perhaps you can talk about the names of plants and animals we would see at Pahurehure estuary?
Really enjoyed seeing all your work!